This is pretty personal, but I wanted to get your opinions. I wanted to somehow mention my deceased father in my program and I decided to write a poem. Please tell me what you think... should I change it somehow?
FYI- 'Chris' is my brother and he'll be walking me down the aisle in place of my Father.
Today is the day when I become a wife, You may not be here physically, but your always in my life.
I can feel you smile down on me with happiness in your heart, Because you knew that I found true love from the very start.
I wish you could be here with me to walk me down the aisle, But Chris will be there with me as I wear a great big smile.
Thank you for the love you gave me when you were here with me, I'll always be Daddy's little girl, that I can gaurantee.
So as you have watched over me these past few years, now watch over us, I have a husband now and your blessing of our marriage would really be a plus.
I just want you to know that I miss you very much, But I am grateful for the memories that I will always clutch.
You're always in my heart, always and forever, I'm blessed to have you with me as I begin this new adventure.
buggiegirl
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really beautiful and touching- and made me cry
i think it is a perfect way to remember your father on that day
06NovBride
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I like it....I think it's really nice.
jersee3380
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love it, brought tears to my eyes
Soon2BMrsA
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very sweet!!
AnniesSS
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You did a great job!! Made me cry!!!
johnsae
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VERY nice - I wouldn't change a thing
DayBeforeThanksgiving
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Aww, thanks girls! I was crying while I wrote it.. I'm such a mush!!!
littlebookworm4
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OMG!!! I couldn't finish it!! I'm bawling!! My brother is walking me down as well and on my website I have a similar poem for my Dad too.
DayBeforeThanksgiving
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Oh, I'd love to read it!
I'm dancing with my Mom.... are you?
PrincessConsuela
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that was soo good i am crying now. that is perfect!
JLH
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I think its a beautiful poem. It made my cry.
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Posted by buggiegirl
really beautiful and touching- and made me cry
i think it is a perfect way to remember your father on that day
Awww, me too. It's so beautiful. Sorry about your dad, but I'm sure he'll be watching you on your very special day.
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I'm tearing up--that is really sweet. I wouldn't change a thing.
acre730
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It is perfect......You will definately need those tears of joy packets with that poem in the program...Its such a beautiful poem
DayBeforeThanksgiving
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haha, I just made my first (sample) cry pack today... I saw instructions in a Martha Stewart mag.... so I gave it a shot!
103005FallBride
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Absolutely beautiful. I love it. Definitely include it in your programs. It will touch everyone's heart that day.
pinkstar025
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this is me at work: that was so sweet and i think you dad would be so proud!!!
Great JOb!
babybride
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Wow! That was so beautiful! I am in tears. That must have been so hard to write.
Jenn070206
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oh annie bo bannie....that was soo touching...it is perfect!!
