Wording help!

I think we are almost finalized, see the 4 questions below next to <-'s ... also any other advice welcome! thanks!

Invite:

Together with their parents
Mr & Mrs Robert C & <-larger ampersand than rest & different color?
Ms Patricia K & <- do I need “.” After Mr/Mrs/Ms?
Mr George K

Meghan B & Lauren M

Request the Honor of your Presence <- Honor or Honour?
As they exchange vows and begin their life together

Friday, The Twentieth of September, Two Thousand Thirteen <- should the “,” after september be “.”
Six O’Clock in the Evening
Larkfield Manor
507 Larkfield Road East Northport, New York

Reception to Follow



RSVP :

RSVP
Kindly Reply by August 15th

We have reserved __ seats in your honor

M___________________
( ) Accepts with Pleasure
__ Number Attending
( ) Declines with Regret

Wording help!

see pix in my album for actual layout

Wording help!

bump! any thoughts?

Re: Wording help!

Your invite samples are adorable!

Here is how I would word/punctuate the invites-
Hope it helps!



Together with their parents
Mr. & Mrs. Robert C & *I like the idea of the large & here*
Ms. Patricia K
&
Mr. George K *They are divorced right? maybe separate the names like this instead?*

Meghan B & Lauren M

request the honor of your presence *Honor is the American spelling*
as they exchange vows and begin their life together

Friday, The Twentieth of September
Two Thousand Thirteen *No comma or period after September*
Six O’Clock in the Evening

Larkfield Manor
507 Larkfield Road
East Northport, New York

Reception to Follow



RSVP :

RSVP
Kindly Reply by August 15th

We have reserved __ seats in your honor

M___________________
( ) Accepts with Pleasure
__ Number Attending
( ) Declines with Regret

Re: Wording help!

Thanks!

Wording help!

Oooh that's a good idea to put the year on the next line, so you don't have to try and punctuate between month and year. I think the date reads better that way.

Re: Wording help!

This is what I would do....


Together with their parents
Mr & Mrs Robert C & <- I think def the larger ampersand than rest will look good. Maybe a different color too or just make it bold? See if you can play with it and see what looks best.
Ms Patricia K & <- I would say yes to putting “.” after Mr/Mrs/Ms
Mr George K

Meghan B & Lauren M <-if you do a different color ampersand above I would do one here too so that the above ampersand doesn't stand out too much when you glance at the overall invitation. That's just me being nit-picky, see how it looks

Request the Honor of your Presence <- Honor
As they exchange vows and begin their life together

Friday, The Twentieth of September, Two Thousand Thirteen <- I believe this is correct it should be “,' or you can put the year on the next line and avoid punctuation

Re: Wording help!

thanks!

our names already had the different color here thats
where i stole the idea from LOL


as long as there is space i agree with everyone on the 2nd line for the year- great idea!!
I'm trying to make sure it all comes out nicely lined up so i will def get a sample! thanks!