(working) PIC of my TABLE NAME!! (any suggestions??)
Original post by little j
Soooo, John and I eat out A LOT!! so we decided to name our tables after some of our favorite restaurants.
here is a sample that my DOC made us.
any suggestions on the wording for the top part? i feel like i wrote it funny, but i cant think of how to fix it.
thanks!
edited to delete picture before barb beats me
brittndave
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the top wording sounds a little funny to me... i dunno how to change it yet but i'll think and get back to you
i have to agree with the other girls about teh contact info at the bottom. if you include the location (ex. NYC like in the bottom wording above), they can easily google the name and city and be able to find it!
Its2Snappy
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What about for the top text something like...
'Janis and John have foregone traditional table numbers to give recognition to the restaurants that have a special place in their hearts. Here is Table...'
little j
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Posted by Its2Snappy
What about for the top text something like...
'Janis and John have foregone traditional table numbers to give recognition to the restaurants that have a special place in their hearts. Here is Table...'
sounding better already!
oktropical
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love it!!
CappyGirl
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Such a cute idea!
CloudNine
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super cute idea! maybe for the text on top, just get rid of the line that starts with therefore. i dont think it needs further explanation
AdriandSteve
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great idea! Looks great!
soontobecruz
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very cute!
I don't know if I would add their address though. That is throwing me off a little like you are advertising for them.
JLWSJC
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Maybe:
Janis and John are aficionados of the dining out experience. So, in lieu of table numbers, they have opted to name their tables after special restaurants that are dear to their hearts.
This is a quick first draft... I'd refine it more, but I think it's a little more poetic than what's there. Good luck, great idea! I love the addreses on the table cards and I agree with centering the text.
