Need Opinions - Invite Mockup with Pic

Original post by futurestevens

Jan 11, 2011 12:02 PM

Hey Ladies....I need your honest opinions! I've been working on my invites for awhile and now I need your input. What do you think? Is there anything that needs to be changed/looks weird/makes you want to puke? Please be honest!!

mockup of everything in the pocketfold:

ChristeveT Posted: Jan 11, 2011 01:17 PM

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Posted by futurestevens

Do we like the outline better?

I like the original... LOOKS AWESOME!

futurestevens Posted: Jan 11, 2011 01:22 PM

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Posted by ChristeveT

Posted by futurestevens

Do we like the outline better?

I like the original... LOOKS AWESOME!

yeah, i'm not sure how i feel about the outline right now. it looks kinda meh i think i need to play around with it and see what else i can come up with

bebita0830 Posted: Jan 11, 2011 01:25 PM

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there's not one wrong thing I can say about this invite....very pretty!

futurestevens Posted: Jan 11, 2011 01:28 PM

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Posted by bebita0830

there's not one wrong thing I can say about this invite....very pretty!

aww thanks!

HSsweethearts Posted: Jan 11, 2011 01:29 PM

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I think the RSVP font is too big compared to the other fonts and I liek the outline of long island MUCH better. The colored in version kind of looked like a blob..it was 'too much' IMO.

Otherwise totally GORGEOUS!

futurestevens Posted: Jan 11, 2011 01:42 PM

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Posted by HSsweethearts

I think the RSVP font is too big compared to the other fonts and I liek the outline of long island MUCH better. The colored in version kind of looked like a blob..it was 'too much' IMO.

Otherwise totally GORGEOUS!

thanks...i actually reduced the font size for the RSVP card and it looks much better now.

kimmaymb20 Posted: Jan 11, 2011 01:47 PM

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what is wrong with these ?????? I love them I think they are gorgeous!!!!

futurestevens Posted: Jan 11, 2011 01:59 PM

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Posted by kimmaymb20

what is wrong with these ?????? I love them I think they are gorgeous!!!!

thanks kim!! I'm still not 100% happy with the directions card...i don't like the 'big blob' of long island and i don't really like the outline either

what to do, what to do

haha

VCanizalez Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:02 PM

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O M G

I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kimmaymb20 Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:05 PM

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Posted by futurestevens

Posted by kimmaymb20

what is wrong with these ?????? I love them I think they are gorgeous!!!!

thanks kim!! I'm still not 100% happy with the directions card...i don't like the 'big blob' of long island and i don't really like the outline either

what to do, what to do

haha

Its not your fault that LI is just a big doodie hanging out of the east coast

happy4ever Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:05 PM

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So original! I really love it!

futurestevens Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:06 PM

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Posted by kimmaymb20

Posted by futurestevens

Posted by kimmaymb20

what is wrong with these ?????? I love them I think they are gorgeous!!!!

thanks kim!! I'm still not 100% happy with the directions card...i don't like the 'big blob' of long island and i don't really like the outline either

what to do, what to do

haha

Its not your fault that LI is just a big doodie hanging out of the east coast

smilesjc81 Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:07 PM

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is my opinion stated clearly?

my only other question would be
can long island be made an outline instead of a solid color?

mrsq2be Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:08 PM

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kim - did you jsut say doodie?! lol

futurestevens Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:09 PM

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Posted by smilesjc81

is my opinion stated clearly?

my only other question would be
can long island be made an outline instead of a solid color?

haha awww thanks naomi!

check the bottom of page 1, i posted an outline there..which do you like better?

SoonToBeMrsCali Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:09 PM

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Maybe you can find an etching of the vineyards or an outside pic of them and modify it with the pencil/charcoal brush in Photoshop?

smilesjc81 Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:12 PM

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i like the outline better, it's easier on the eye than the color one.

futurestevens Posted: Jan 11, 2011 02:14 PM

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Posted by SoonToBeMrsCali

Maybe you can find an etching of the vineyards or an outside pic of them and modify it with the pencil/charcoal brush in Photoshop?

i actually had a sketch of the vineyards on my original directions card and couldn't decide if i liked it. let me find it and post for your opinions