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Please check my invite wording...

smilealways Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:10 PM+

smilealways MEMBER SINCE: 7/03 TOTAL POSTS : 1823 WEDDING DATE: Jun 18, 2005

Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:10 PM

Please check my invite wording...

and tell me if I need to fix anything! Thanks!

Beautiful is the day that is touched by love
Jack and Deborah ****
and John and Teresa ****
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Christine Nancy
and Joseph John
on Saturday, the eighteenth of June
Two thousand and five
at eleven o'clock in the morning
The Vineyard Caterers
978 Main Road
Aquebogue, New York
Reception immediately following

ssdbk Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:24 PM+

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Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:24 PM

Re: Please check my invite wording...

Are you supposed to capitalize the 'Eleven?'

suven Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:25 PM+

suven MEMBER SINCE: 8/03 TOTAL POSTS : 5958 WEDDING DATE: May 30, 2004

Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:25 PM

Re: Please check my invite wording...

no, you don't have to capitalize eleven

the only thing I thought of was, why not put the 'and' between you and your FH's name on its own line?

marriage of

Mary

and

John

Soon2BMrsA Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:30 PM+

Soon2BMrsA MEMBER SINCE: 11/04 TOTAL POSTS : 2855 WEDDING DATE: Jun 18, 2005

Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:30 PM

Re: Please check my invite wording...

Posted by suven

no, you don't have to capitalize eleven

the only thing I thought of was, why not put the 'and' between you and your FH's name on its own line?

marriage of

Mary

and

John

Hi date twin! I was going to suggest the same thing.

smilealways Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:30 PM+

smilealways MEMBER SINCE: 7/03 TOTAL POSTS : 1823 WEDDING DATE: Jun 18, 2005

Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:30 PM

Re: Please check my invite wording...

I wanted to put it on a separate line, but it's $1 extra per invite to add that extra line just for that one word... is it worth it?

smilealways Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:39 PM+

smilealways MEMBER SINCE: 7/03 TOTAL POSTS : 1823 WEDDING DATE: Jun 18, 2005

Posted: Feb 14, 2005 05:39 PM

Re: Please check my invite wording...

oops! Nevermind! I just called the invitation company and it's a one time charge - definitely worth it! Thanks!

JimmysBride Posted: Feb 14, 2005 06:21 PM+

JimmysBride MEMBER SINCE: 7/03 TOTAL POSTS : 10131 WEDDING DATE: Oct 09, 2004 WEDDING LOCATION: St. Agnes Cathedral

Posted: Feb 14, 2005 06:21 PM

Re: Please check my invite wording...

Looks great. The only thing is I don't think you need the 'and' in the year. So instead of:

Two thousand and five

I think it's supposed to be:

Two thousand five