check out my invite wording

How does this sound???

Because you have shared in our lives
by your friendship and love
XXX Ann
Daughter of
Mr. and Mrs. Goldie Locks
And
XXXX John
Son of
Mr. and Mrs. John Doe
request the honour of your presence
as we are united in the
Sacrament of Holy Matrimony
saturday, the twentieth-eight of october
two-thousand and six
at half past two in the afternoon
Church
small town, new york

TIA

Re: check out my invite wording

I personally like seeing the names of the couple appearing together on the invitation.

But, if that wasn't something you were going for, it sounds pretty other than that! I like the first two lines!