Please double check my invite wording before I print!!!! THANKS!!!

Here it goes....

We will walk side-by-side
hand-in-hand…forever

Mr. and Mrs. Stephen Joseph XXXX
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Rachel Elizabeth
to
Colin XXXX
on Saturday, the seventh of October
two thousand and six
at half past three in the afternoon
Westminster United Presbyterian Church
West Islip, New York

Any advice would be greatly appreciated!!! Thanks ladies!!!

Re: Please double check my invite wording before I print!!!! THANKS!!!

The 't' in two thousand and six needs to be capitalized. So it should read Two thousand and six.

Re: Please double check my invite wording before I print!!!! THANKS!!!

do you need the hyphens in 'side by side' and 'hand in hand'? And is FH okay with his parents not being on there? if so, looks good :)