Anyone good at writing Thank-Yous?

I stink at writing these things.

I need to say thank you to some of my coworkers who put together a really nice surprise for my birthday.

I don't want to sound too mushy becasue they are coworkers, but I don't want to make it so generic because I was really touched by what they did.

Can anyone help??


Thanks

Re: Anyone good at writing Thank-Yous?

Maybe something along the lines of:

Dear _______,

I can't thank you enough for remembering my birthday and for the wonderful surprise you gave me. I hope you know that I was truly touched by your thoughtfulness. It's a birthday I'll certainly remember!

Thank you, again!

Best,

Re: Anyone good at writing Thank-Yous?

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Posted by meg922

Maybe something along the lines of:

Dear _______,

I can't thank you enough for remembering my birthday and for the wonderful surprise you gave me. I hope you know that I was truly touched by your thoughtfulness. It's a birthday I'll certainly remember!

Thank you, again!

Best,

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Thanks...that's good. Do you think I have to rearrange it for the 3 different people that put it together or the same message is good?


Thansk for your help!!!

Re: Anyone good at writing Thank-Yous?

I think if you're sending the message by e-mail, you can do the same message to all three in a joint e-mail. If you're doing handwritten thank yous, I'd try to customize each one:

Maybe:

Dear ______,

Thank you for the fantastic birthday surprise! I never suspected a thing. I am truly touched by your thoughtfulness and the hard work that went into pulling it off!

Thank you!


-and-

Dear ____,

I just wanted to take a moment to thank you for your thoughtfulness in remembering my birthday, not to mention all that you did to surprise me! I am touched by all that you did to make my special day memorable.

Thank you, again!

HTH

Re: Anyone good at writing Thank-Yous?

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Posted by meg922

I think if you're sending the message by e-mail, you can do the same message to all three in a joint e-mail. If you're doing handwritten thank yous, I'd try to customize each one:

Maybe:

Dear ______,

Thank you for the fantastic birthday surprise! I never suspected a thing. I am truly touched by your thoughtfulness and the hard work that went into pulling it off!

Thank you!


-and-

Dear ____,

I just wanted to take a moment to thank you for your thoughtfulness in remembering my birthday, not to mention all that you did to surprise me! I am touched by all that you did to make my special day memorable.

Thank you, again!

HTH

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Damn, your good!


Thanks!!!!

Re: Anyone good at writing Thank-Yous?

Glad I could help!

Re: Anyone good at writing Thank-Yous?

You sure did ---thanks!!!!