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Invite Wording PLEASE
M_J Posted: Dec 02, 2008 05:33 PM+
M_J MEMBER SINCE: 5/08 TOTAL POSTS : 356 WEDDING DATE: Mar 14, 2009
Posted: Dec 02, 2008 05:33 PM bride-minus.png

Invite Wording PLEASE

Can I get a few opinions please?
Does this sound ok?

Together with their parents

Jill Smith

and

Jack Miller

invite you to share in
their marriage celebration

Saturday, the fourteenth of March
Two thousand and nine
at Half past seven in the evening

Place
City, New York

Dinner and Dancing to Follow

I like everything but I want to make sure the 'invite you to share in their marriage celebration' makes sense... PS Not worried about capitals etc the font in all caps. Thx!
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meara Posted: Dec 02, 2008 05:37 PM+
meara MEMBER SINCE: 7/08 TOTAL POSTS : 3327 WEDDING DATE: Jun 07, 2009
Posted: Dec 02, 2008 05:37 PM bride-minus.png

Re: Invite Wording PLEASE


I think it sounds fine or you could say
'in the celebration of their marriage'
or
'in celebrating their marriage' but I think it sounds good the way it is.
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MakingofaMulligan Posted: Dec 02, 2008 05:44 PM+
MakingofaMulligan MEMBER SINCE: 1/08 TOTAL POSTS : 784 WEDDING DATE: Jan 17, 2009
Posted: Dec 02, 2008 05:44 PM bride-minus.png

Re: Invite Wording PLEASE

mine says 'at the celebration of the Nuptial Mass'

I'll just write the exact phrasing...
Mr & Mrs
request the honour of your presense at the marriage of their daughter

katie
to
Johno

asking the blessing of God upon this union at the celebration of the nuptial mass

sat 17th....etc.
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shmegs102 Posted: Dec 02, 2008 05:50 PM+
shmegs102 MEMBER SINCE: 9/08 TOTAL POSTS : 359 WEDDING DATE: Jan 01, 2007
Posted: Dec 02, 2008 05:50 PM bride-minus.png

Re: Invite Wording PLEASE

Mine says:

Mr. and Mrs. _________
and
Mr. and Mrs. _________
Request the pleasure of your company
at the marriage of their children
______________
and
______________
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missjones2007 Posted: Dec 02, 2008 06:58 PM+
missjones2007 MEMBER SINCE: 9/07 TOTAL POSTS : 2368 WEDDING DATE: Apr 18, 2009
Posted: Dec 02, 2008 06:58 PM bride-minus.png

Re: Invite Wording PLEASE

our is:
It is with joy that we
latoya blah blah
and
eric blah blah
invote you to celebrate as we exchange our wedding vows
on April 18 09
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M_J Posted: Dec 02, 2008 09:22 PM+
M_J MEMBER SINCE: 5/08 TOTAL POSTS : 356 WEDDING DATE: Mar 14, 2009
Posted: Dec 02, 2008 09:22 PM bride-minus.png

Re: Invite Wording PLEASE

Thanks all!
I went with invite you to share in the celebration of their marriage.
: )
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