Check my invitation wording

This day I will marry my best friend,
the one I laugh with, live for, love
Julie Xxxxx
and
Raymond Xxxxxx
together with their parents
hope that you will join in this celebration
on Friday, the twenty-fourth of September
Two thousand and four
at six-thirty in the evening
Huntington Townhouse
124 East Jericho Turnpike
Huntington Station, New York

Reception to follow



Am I missing any comma's near 'together with their parents'? Do you think the last line is or is there something better to write?

Re: Check my invitation wording

i dont think you missed any commas or punctuations and I think the last line is good short and sweet

Re: Check my invitation wording

This day I will marry my best friend,
the one I laugh with, live for, love.

Julie Xxxxx
and
Raymond Xxxxxx,

together with their parents
hope that you will join in this celebration
on Friday, the twenty-fourth of September
Two thousand and four
at six-thirty in the evening

Huntington Townhouse
124 East Jericho Turnpike
Huntington Station, New York

Reception to follow

that's how i would do it - i added a period after the first two lines, a comma after his name and some spacing so your names stand out.

Re: Check my invitation wording

its beautiful Julz sounds perfect

Re: Check my invitation wording

Its sounds good.. We also did a small space above my name and below his, and actually the font is one size bigger than the rest. They look nice like that..

Re: Check my invitation wording

Or names are going to be a little bigger and in a different font, but we can't really do the spaces because there isn't enough room!

Re: Check my invitation wording

I think the wording is prefect!

Re: Check my invitation wording

So everyone else thinks it is OK? I am going to be ordering any day now... actually probably on Tuesday.