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please check my invitation wording

bridzilla Posted: Apr 08, 2004 01:16 PM+

bridzilla MEMBER SINCE: 12/03 TOTAL POSTS : 671 WEDDING DATE: Aug 27, 2004

Posted: Apr 08, 2004 01:16 PM

please check my invitation wording

Hi,
I'm about to send the wording to the printers. Would you all please look at it and let me know what you think.
Thanks sooooo much!

Invitation

Mr. and Mrs. A
request the honor of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
S
to
Mr. R B
on Friday, the twenty-seventh day of August
two-thousand and four
at seven o’clock in the evening

Vanderbilt Mansion
Oakdale, New York

Reception to follow

Response card

The favor of your reply is requested
before June 11, 2004
Name(s) _________________________
__ accept with pleasure
__ decline with regret

(I'm planning on sending out the invitations May 17)

Website card
Please visit www.website.com for information about lodging, directions, and more.

(is there something better I can say on the website card?)

Bebalina Posted: Apr 08, 2004 01:17 PM+

Bebalina MEMBER SINCE: 1/04 TOTAL POSTS : 4892 WEDDING DATE: May 14, 2005

Posted: Apr 08, 2004 01:17 PM