Recipe Card poem help

I'm MOH in a friends wedding in July. I am ordering Bridal shower invites today, and I am i also going to insert recipe cards. I'm trying to come up with a cute poem to order with the invites for the recipe card.

This is what I've got so far:

In order to help Crista become the perfect wife,
Give her your favorite recipes to try.
Write down the ingredients & tools, ie a knife,
Don't leave out the procedures, saute, bake or fry.
With your help she'll become quite the lil cook,
and there will never be a need for another cookbook.
Please bring the recipe with you that day,
In a recipe box they'll go and forever stay.

I'm a lil iffy about some of the lines.

Let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions. Thanks

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I think its really good. Cute idea.

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Thats so cute...I also found this one from this site...I saved it...

Enclosed for you is a recipe card.
To fill it in shouldn't be hard.
(Bride's name) might like to try your favorite cake,
or whatever it is you like to make.
So don't forget this card on this special date.
Fill it in now, don't hesitate.
At the shower will be a recipe box to fill.
So bring this recipe card, if you will.

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Posted by MrsJ08

Thats so cute...I also found this one from this site...I saved it...

Enclosed for you is a recipe card.
To fill it in shouldn't be hard.
(Bride's name) might like to try your favorite cake,
or whatever it is you like to make.
So don't forget this card on this special date.
Fill it in now, don't hesitate.
At the shower will be a recipe box to fill.
So bring this recipe card, if you will.

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Yeah, someone posted that on LIF, and I think its cute too. I'm so bad at making decisions and am hard on myself, which do you like betteR?

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I like yours because its very specific
The other one is too general.

Since I'm soooo bored here...I did a little modifying lol
hope you like it!

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In order to help Crista become the perfect wife…
Give her your favorite recipes and she can give it a try.

Write down the ingredients, measurements & tools…
Don't leave out the details and all the important rules.

With your help she'll become quite the lil cook…
and there will never be a need for another cookbook.

Please bring the recipe with you on her special day…
In a recipe box they'll go and forever it will stay.

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Made these for my sisters shower...

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Posted by Jenn04

Made these for my sisters shower...

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Thanks, Those are cute!

Re: Recipe Card poem help

Hey Megan...you might like this too if you are doing a wishing well:

Spices, detergents, and gadgets galore,
there are never enough, you can always use more.
You don't need to wrap it and your name do not tell... for it's just a little something for (bride)'s wishing well.

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Posted by Princess Cut Bride

Hey Megan...you might like this too if you are doing a wishing well:

Spices, detergents, and gadgets galore,
there are never enough, you can always use more.
You don't need to wrap it and your name do not tell... for it's just a little something for (bride)'s wishing well.

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Aww thats really cute, we havent talked about a wishing well yet, but I really like that