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Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)

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alexlynn7
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Member since 4/04

2019 total posts

Wedding Date:
5/28/2005 7:00 PM

Wed. Location:
Vanderbilt Mansion

Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)

ok, so i've got a few options for invite wording and i need people to help me choose! basically, i want to actively include my late father in the invitation, but i'm not quite sure how to do it.

thanks to all of the 05ers who helped me put together these options!!! here goes:

1)
Mrs. L.S.,
on behalf of herself and of the late Mr. J. S.,
requests the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
A. L. S.
to
G. M. W.
on Saturday, the twenty-eighth of May
Two thousand and Five
at six-thirty in the evening
Idle Hour, the Vanderbilt Mansion at Oakdale
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York

2)
Mrs. J. S.
requests the honour of your presence
at the marriage of her daughter
A. L. S.
to
G. M. W.
on Saturday, the twenty-eighth of May
Two thousand and Five
at six-thirty in the evening
Idle Hour, the Vanderbilt Mansion at Oakdale
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York

3)
Mrs. L.S. and the late Mr. J.S.
request the honour of your presence
at their marriage of their daughter,
A L S
to
GMW,
son of Mr. and Dr. B.W.
on Saturday, the twenty-eighth of May
Two thousand and Five
at six-thirty in the evening
Idle Hour, the Vanderbilt Mansion at Oakdale
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York

4)
Your company is requested at the marriage of
A.L.S.
to
G.M.W.
at the blah blah at x time

Mrs. L.S. and the late Mr. J.S.

5)
Mrs. L.S.,
With special memories of the late Mr. J.S.,
requests the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
A. L. S.
to
G. M. W.
on Saturday, the twenty-eighth of May
Two thousand and Five
at six-thirty in the evening
Idle Hour, the Vanderbilt Mansion at Oakdale
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York

thanks in advance, everyone!

Posted 10/23/04 2:36 PM
 

RedHead
6 people and counting :*

Member since 10/03

18760 total posts

Wedding Date:
10/2/2004 12:00 AM

Wed. Location:
Fox Hollow :)

Re: Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)

hmmmm....I like 1 or 2

Posted 10/23/04 2:39 PM
 

snowprincess805
happily married

Member since 4/04

1941 total posts

Wedding Date:
8/13/2005 12:00 AM

Wed. Location:
Bourne Mansion

Re: Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)

i like 2 or 3 best

the first i find too verbose

Posted 10/23/04 2:41 PM
 
 

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