Search Forums

Wedding Forums > Brides Helping Brides ™ > Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)
Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)
alexlynn7 Posted: Oct 23, 2004 02:36 PM+
alexlynn7 MEMBER SINCE: 4/04 TOTAL POSTS : 2018 WEDDING DATE: May 28, 2005
Posted: Oct 23, 2004 02:36 PM bride-minus.png

Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)

ok, so i've got a few options for invite wording and i need people to help me choose! basically, i want to actively include my late father in the invitation, but i'm not quite sure how to do it.

thanks to all of the 05ers who helped me put together these options!!! here goes:

1)
Mrs. L.S.,
on behalf of herself and of the late Mr. J. S.,
requests the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
A. L. S.
to
G. M. W.
on Saturday, the twenty-eighth of May
Two thousand and Five
at six-thirty in the evening
Idle Hour, the Vanderbilt Mansion at Oakdale
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York

2)
Mrs. J. S.
requests the honour of your presence
at the marriage of her daughter
A. L. S.
to
G. M. W.
on Saturday, the twenty-eighth of May
Two thousand and Five
at six-thirty in the evening
Idle Hour, the Vanderbilt Mansion at Oakdale
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York

3)
Mrs. L.S. and the late Mr. J.S.
request the honour of your presence
at their marriage of their daughter,
A L S
to
GMW,
son of Mr. and Dr. B.W.
on Saturday, the twenty-eighth of May
Two thousand and Five
at six-thirty in the evening
Idle Hour, the Vanderbilt Mansion at Oakdale
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York

4)
Your company is requested at the marriage of
A.L.S.
to
G.M.W.
at the blah blah at x time

Mrs. L.S. and the late Mr. J.S.

5)
Mrs. L.S.,
With special memories of the late Mr. J.S.,
requests the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
A. L. S.
to
G. M. W.
on Saturday, the twenty-eighth of May
Two thousand and Five
at six-thirty in the evening
Idle Hour, the Vanderbilt Mansion at Oakdale
Idle Hour Boulevard
Oakdale, New York

thanks in advance, everyone!
Reply   |   Quote    |   Subscribe   |   Report
RedHead Posted: Oct 23, 2004 02:39 PM+
RedHead MEMBER SINCE: 10/03 TOTAL POSTS : 18740 WEDDING DATE: Oct 02, 2004
Posted: Oct 23, 2004 02:39 PM bride-minus.png

Re: Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)

hmmmm....I like 1 or 2
Reply   |   Quote    |   Subscribe   |   Report
snowprincess805 Posted: Oct 23, 2004 02:41 PM+
snowprincess805 MEMBER SINCE: 4/04 TOTAL POSTS : 1936 WEDDING DATE: Aug 13, 2005
Posted: Oct 23, 2004 02:41 PM bride-minus.png

Re: Please help me choose my invite wording! (with poll)

i like 2 or 3 best

the first i find too verbose
Reply   |   Quote    |   Subscribe   |   Report
No Posts Found With Your Match.
  • Chat With Local Long Island Brides
  • Chat With Local Brides
  • Long Island Bridal Expo
  • Villa Lombardi's-Villa Lombardi's
  • Royal Palm-The Royal Palm
  • Bands-
 
Welcome New Vendors
X
X
X
X
Email to Friend
X
Submit a Report