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Can you proof this for me?

jenheartsrob Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:13 PM+

jenheartsrob MEMBER SINCE: 6/05 TOTAL POSTS : 1566 WEDDING DATE: Oct 07, 2006

Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:13 PM

Can you proof this for me?

I can't post the PDF with the pretty fonts, but Jennifer from Tying The Knot just sent me a proof of my invite.... can you proof with me please? THANKS!!

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Jennifer Lynn
and
Robert David
together with their parents
Mr. and Mrs. Joseph V____
and
Mr. and Mrs. Jeffrey T___
request the honour of your presence
at their marriage
Saturday, the seventh of October
Two thousand and six
promptly at twelve o’clock in the afternoon
The Coral House
Baldwin, New York

Reception immediately following

October Bliss Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:15 PM+

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Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:15 PM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

Looks fine except for the 'and' in two thousand 'and' six. It doesn't belong there. Should read two-thousand six.

evnme Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:16 PM+

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Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:16 PM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

i agree w/ october bliss

soon2bcopswife Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:18 PM+

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Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:18 PM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

Also, Honour is for a house of worship, honor is for any other venue.

jenheartsrob Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:22 PM+

jenheartsrob MEMBER SINCE: 6/05 TOTAL POSTS : 1566 WEDDING DATE: Oct 07, 2006

Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:22 PM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

Is it really? I thought 'honour' was just to make it more formal... So it's bad to use it?

evnme Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:23 PM+

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Posted: Jun 23, 2006 02:23 PM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

i would still use honour

cherryj24 Posted: Jun 23, 2006 03:01 PM+

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Posted: Jun 23, 2006 03:01 PM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

I used honour.

Oh yeah and i forgot to put reception immediately following. how bad is THAT??

franksgirl323 Posted: Jun 23, 2006 03:01 PM+

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Posted: Jun 23, 2006 03:01 PM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

yep....the and doesn't belong.

soon2bcopswife Posted: Jun 23, 2006 03:13 PM+

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Posted: Jun 23, 2006 03:13 PM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

Posted by jenheartsrob

Is it really? I thought 'honour' was just to make it more formal... So it's bad to use it?

If you are really into etiquette, but I wouldn't care either, I personally like Honour better.

AlmostMrsKelly Posted: Jun 24, 2006 01:51 AM+

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Posted: Jun 24, 2006 01:51 AM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

we also used 'honour'

patticakes Posted: Jun 24, 2006 08:55 AM+

patticakes MEMBER SINCE: 1/06 TOTAL POSTS : 2388 WEDDING DATE: Oct 14, 2006

Posted: Jun 24, 2006 08:55 AM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

Yes, just the 'and' in the year....Otherwise very nice.

reenielady Posted: Jun 24, 2006 09:53 AM+

reenielady MEMBER SINCE: 12/05 TOTAL POSTS : 1117 WEDDING DATE: Oct 28, 2006

Posted: Jun 24, 2006 09:53 AM

Re: Can you proof this for me?

Looks good -I was wondering do you really think you need promptly. If you are worried if people are going to be a little late you could always say 11:45 in the morning.

R&J0806 Posted: Jun 24, 2006 04:57 PM+

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Posted: Jun 24, 2006 04:57 PM