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GrkItalWedding
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6/24/2007 1:30 PM
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EDITED: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
So I found this poem on LIW that I like, and was wondering if you ladies could help proof read it. Please let me know if any of the punctuation and capitalization of words is missing/incorrect.
By the way, I am using fake names and a fake eatery!! Hope you get a kick out of it! 
Thanks!!
Brad popped the question
and Angelina said YES!
All the planning is over,
from the hall to the dress.
Only one thing remains
for this day to be great
“Practice makes Perfect”
June 21st is the date.
We’ll practice the ceremony
and iron out the kinks.
Then it’s off to McDonald's
for dinner and drinks.
Regrets Only
Jennifer Aniston 516-555-5555
EDITED:
How does this look now?
Brad popped the question and Angelina said YES!
All of the planning is over, from the hall to the dress.
Only one thing remains for this day to be great
“Practice makes Perfect,” June 21st is the date.
We’ll practice the ceremony and iron out the kinks.
Then it’s off to McDonald's for dinner and drinks.
Saint Anthony's Roman Catholic Church
7 o'clock in the evening
Regrets Only
Jennifer Aniston
516-555-5555
Message edited 4/18/2007 4:08:43 PM.
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chellynyc
WE'RE FINALLY MARRIED!!!!!!!!!
Member since 10/05 5083 total posts
Wedding Date:
11/3/2007 2:30 PM
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Floral Terrace
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
Looks good, I'm using a similar one as well.
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Posted 4/18/07 9:56 AM
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GrkItalWedding
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Member since 2/06 792 total posts
Wedding Date:
6/24/2007 1:30 PM
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North Ritz Club
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
Posted by chellynyc
Looks good, I'm using a similar one as well.
Thank you!
Can anyone else lend an eye?
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Posted 4/18/07 1:34 PM
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Aug07OFCbride
Love our anniv pics!
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Wedding Date:
8/12/2007 4:00 PM
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The Old Field Club
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
looks great, cute wording!
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Posted 4/18/07 2:13 PM
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PattyK
Trick or Treat!!!
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Wedding Date:
10/7/2007 12:00 PM
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Awesome Place
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
Looks good to me.
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Posted 4/18/07 2:14 PM
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Aug07OFCbride
Love our anniv pics!
Member since 2/07 8081 total posts
Wedding Date:
8/12/2007 4:00 PM
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
one thing..
maybe a comma or dash after "great"? not sure tho.
Message edited 4/18/2007 2:16:26 PM.
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Posted 4/18/07 2:16 PM
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Pinkiegirll07
TYs on the way!!
Member since 10/06 2574 total posts
Wedding Date:
9/15/2007 2:30 PM
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Crescent Beach Club
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
So cute! I notebooked it!
The only line I have a question about is whether it should say All OF the planning, not all the planning...
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Posted 4/18/07 2:31 PM
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vmystique33
Eva Marie is 10 wks old!!
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
Love it
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Posted 4/18/07 2:33 PM
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GrkItalWedding
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Wedding Date:
6/24/2007 1:30 PM
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North Ritz Club
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
Posted by Aug07OFCbride
one thing..
maybe a comma or dash after "great"? not sure tho.
maybe a comma would be appropriate?
when you read it, you kind of pause right after the "great"
anyone else with an opinion on this editing comment?
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Posted 4/18/07 3:09 PM
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GrkItalWedding
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Wedding Date:
6/24/2007 1:30 PM
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North Ritz Club
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
Posted by Pinkiegirll07
So cute! I notebooked it!
The only line I have a question about is whether it should say All OF the planning, not all the planning...
I think I will add the "of".
Thanks!!
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Posted 4/18/07 3:10 PM
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dawnbridetobe
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6/24/2007 10:30 AM
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
There's no time listed.
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Posted 4/18/07 3:19 PM
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GrkItalWedding
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Wedding Date:
6/24/2007 1:30 PM
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North Ritz Club
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
Posted by dawnbridetobe
There's no time listed.
OMG!!!!!!!! You're right!
DUHHHHHHHHHHHH 
Now how am I going to add that in??
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Posted 4/18/07 3:53 PM
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eelharas4700
Living happily ever after
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7/21/2007 11:30 AM
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Smithtown Landing-A+++
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
i love it! i planned on stealing the idea myself! so who ever posted it, thanks!!
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Posted 4/18/07 3:58 PM
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GrkItalWedding
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Wedding Date:
6/24/2007 1:30 PM
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North Ritz Club
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Re: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
OK...see original post for edits made.
opinions please?
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Posted 4/18/07 4:08 PM
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eelharas4700
Living happily ever after
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7/21/2007 11:30 AM
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Smithtown Landing-A+++
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Re: EDITED: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
i wouldnt change a thing! perfect!
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Posted 4/18/07 4:09 PM
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jessruth9
Beautiful Babies!
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7/5/2008 4:00 PM
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Brentwood Country Club
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Re: EDITED: Please help Proof Read our RD Invite
So cute.
I love the names as well.
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Posted 4/18/07 4:23 PM
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